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I found out about it from a web site called Real Kids Real Adventures when someone accidentally put this site on there. I had to check it out and liked ...

I like it. [quote]You saw it too, I bet[quote/] I would take the I bet part out of it. Other than that there are some punctuation needed in areas. The ...

Short and sweet. It has a good message in it. My advice though is not to capitalize the first letter of every line unless it is a new sentence. I ...

I really liked this one. All I saw was some punctuation errors. In the last line you don't need the dash. I think in this one the repeating was necessary. ...

It had a good meaning. The only part that got me just like in_too_deep said is the end. Instead of repeating yourself just keep one of those lines.

*cries* That is so depressing to write this in an attempt to make your friend feel guilty for what she has decided to do. It's great that she didn't get ...

I LOVE PANIC! AT THE DISCO!!!! THEY ARE SO AWESOME!!!

It's not really supposed to sound good sexual but bad. I am afraid to be in the bedsheets that i'm in because in the poem i'm not having a great ...

I love the quotes. The bacon sandwich one was funny. Where do you go to make these???

They are aweome!!! You have a lot of talent and i am so jealous because i can't draw.

It's cool but he needs more facial features and stuff like that.

I absolutely love it. The only thing i would change is more detail about the surroundings and what exactly they are doing. I think it was sweet.

It made me want to cry. I can feel the emotion in it and know it must be about a real person. I loved it. No crit.

Innocence stolen in a horrible way. My heart was broken, my trust lost into a dark mist that is to be forever forgotten, it is almost unknown to me. Mentally, ...

I like it. It's short and sweet but has a good message. Parts of the poem like the line [quote]and all thats right.[quote/] doesn't seem to fit in with the ...